I am a bit sick today, with cold, chills and fever which is fueling my awry emotions. I tried to write a long poem, but my mind went blank after a single stanza. I thought of posting the poem after I finish it, but I have no idea of how its going to be or when will I finish it, if I ever! So I am posting the part I wrote. Hope I would continue writing it.
I fill your wagon of trust with mine,
I see your thoughts cross-by, by mine,
you add my silence to your language of thoughts,
can’t you hear it saying – will you be mine ?
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January 3, 2010 at 5:09 pm |
Awesome! Complete it please.
Btw, the first line! Well, I don’t know about others but I seriously thought you had just written an erotic poem. ha ha. And it didn’t help that I read ‘trust’ as ‘thrust’ in my first read.
January 4, 2010 at 10:24 am |
I second you Reaper. I read it as ‘thirst’ though.
Avi, Good start. Please complete it.
January 4, 2010 at 10:25 am |
interesting poem that..
@Solitary Reaper: ROFL!
January 4, 2010 at 10:29 am |
@Solitary Reaper @ The Lonely Saint : sadashivanige adhe gnana thara your minds are corrupted..
January 4, 2010 at 5:59 pm |
Awesome dude… who is that gal??????
January 4, 2010 at 6:02 pm
can’t you think it to be hypothetical, its just a poem!